‘Rites of Passage’ Pg 34

by admin on November 24, 2014 at 12:01 am

admin

November 27, 2014, 4:11 pm | # | Reply

Thanks for that– you’ll see I did make a dialog adjustment. I hope it adds to clarity and keeps things moving smoothly.
Quieteyes

November 27, 2014, 4:18 am | # | Reply

“It’s said that before she met Mercy’s father…” Since he’s talking to Mercy, shouldn’t that be “…before she met your father…”?