Good to see things moving but a couple of minor nits: 1) What happened to the thing around her left thigh in the inset panel? 2) Is the last line of dialogue supposed to be “No fast enough, Bolt” or “Not fast enough, Bolt.”
Ach. You’ve caught two more. Clearly, I need to set up much more stringent proof-reading before I call these pages “finished”.
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Good to see things moving but a couple of minor nits:
1) What happened to the thing around her left thigh in the inset panel?
2) Is the last line of dialogue supposed to be “No fast enough, Bolt” or “Not fast enough, Bolt.”
Ach. You’ve caught two more. Clearly, I need to set up much more stringent proof-reading before I call these pages “finished”.