I feel like mercy’s face is a bit weird shaped in the second to last panel, like she was stung by a bee while allergic?
Could maybe be her nose and that strand of hair causing an illusion I guess.
Also I love how well you’ve done the rain and water.
Sorry that one face didn’t work for you. Hope the rest of the tale was more satisfying. Thanks for the note about the rain and water. I felt those elements do as a lot of texture to the scene.
Ah, well that’s the storyteller’s goal, isn’t it? Without a bit of suspense, things never really come alive, do they? Anyway- I hope the resolution will make you feel the moment of anxiety was worth it 🙂
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I feel like mercy’s face is a bit weird shaped in the second to last panel, like she was stung by a bee while allergic?
Could maybe be her nose and that strand of hair causing an illusion I guess.
Also I love how well you’ve done the rain and water.
Sorry that one face didn’t work for you. Hope the rest of the tale was more satisfying. Thanks for the note about the rain and water. I felt those elements do as a lot of texture to the scene.
Well I’m just one person, don’t take it too hard. 🙂
You had me worried there for a bit.
Ah, well that’s the storyteller’s goal, isn’t it? Without a bit of suspense, things never really come alive, do they? Anyway- I hope the resolution will make you feel the moment of anxiety was worth it 🙂