Thank you. Yeah, Pell is pretty good at his job. Of course, when the larger, more complicated world comes to his doorstep, we’ll have to see how well he can handle a few new twists and turns, but he managed to make it through his first encounters with Mercy, and that’s not nothing. Glad you like the dialog. I try to keep a character’s voice in my head as I write, and to convey some f their individuality with word choice and syntax as well as the actual content of their message. That’s easiest to do with someone like Pell, who has a distinctive style.
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Ah1 I’m a bit embarrassed that I didn’t catch it. Been too long since I’ve watched the Pythons, I see! Life of Brian,I expect?
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So, sheriff Pell is sizing up the new Rigel contact? BTW, Pell is pretty slick; two can learn a lot by an interrogation. Good dialog, well done.
Thank you. Yeah, Pell is pretty good at his job. Of course, when the larger, more complicated world comes to his doorstep, we’ll have to see how well he can handle a few new twists and turns, but he managed to make it through his first encounters with Mercy, and that’s not nothing. Glad you like the dialog. I try to keep a character’s voice in my head as I write, and to convey some f their individuality with word choice and syntax as well as the actual content of their message. That’s easiest to do with someone like Pell, who has a distinctive style.